Persuasive Writing - Children At Primary Schools Should/Shouldn't Get Paid For Getting Good Grades

Children At Primary Schools Should/Shouldn't Get Paid For Getting Good Grades.

Hi everyone, I’m Ruby and today I am going to try and persuade you that Children At Primary Schools Should/Shouldn't Get Paid For Getting Good Grades. Here are my 2 main reasons

1. Why they should

Combined with

2. Why they shouldn’t

I hope I can persuade you!

Kids should get paid because they’ll need it when they're older. They would get better grades and their parents will be happy with them! But there is one problem. Where would the money come from?  Teachers? No, they had to they have to pay to keep their families well. School? They probably could. They had to keep the school running, too. I wonder if our parents could? Well, if they had enough money they could. If they didn’t… probably not. 

What about the amounts? Some kids would get tiny bits and some could huge bits. Well, there could be different amounts for different grades like: $5 - C Grade, $10 - B Grade, $20 - A Grade and $25 - A+ Grade. Hopefully, that would encourage more kids. Thank you for listening and I hope I persuaded you!!! Again, THANK YOU!!!